I really like the photo you've used for this content page. I like the font you've used for your masthead, really suits the genre of your magazine. I think it would be better if the masthead was behind the model, so all the focus would be directed to the artist. I also like the colour scheme you've used, easy to read and grabs audience attention.
The image is very good for the front cover. THe font colour and font choice is suited to the genre of the magazine. Maybe you could have put the masthead behind the image but overall, very proffessional looking.
I dont really like the way themain image there to much light refecting on her left side of the face, you could of used a lower flash intensity, which make me think twice of the images and how the colour scheme goes with it as they dont not compliement each other, but i like how the layout looks
I like the colour scheme you have used, with the red, white and cream. I would prefer it if your masthead was behind the model as it doesn't make the model the main focus.
I love your front cover, it's very busy, it seems like the magazine will definitely be worth reading. It may be a good idea to have a look at your colour scheme, perhaps, the white is great (thought it merges with her dress a little.), but the red is a little dark and makes it somewhat difficult to read, perhaps you can change it to a lighter red? Perhaps it'll be an idea to to place your pricing in a white text box? It'll allow it to be read a little better. Also, you might want to have a look and see if you can space your text our a bit? The lines seem quite close together. It may be an idea to put your barcode and price to the right, but that's really preferrencial I think. Other than that, great job! I especially love your photography, it seems very suitable to the genre.
I really like the photo you've used for this content page. I like the font you've used for your masthead, really suits the genre of your magazine. I think it would be better if the masthead was behind the model, so all the focus would be directed to the artist. I also like the colour scheme you've used, easy to read and grabs audience attention.
ReplyDeleteThe image is very good for the front cover. THe font colour and font choice is suited to the genre of the magazine. Maybe you could have put the masthead behind the image but overall, very proffessional looking.
ReplyDeleteI dont really like the way themain image there to much light refecting on her left side of the face, you could of used a lower flash intensity, which make me think twice of the images and how the colour scheme goes with it as they dont not compliement each other, but i like how the layout looks
ReplyDeleteI like the colour scheme you have used, with the red, white and cream. I would prefer it if your masthead was behind the model as it doesn't make the model the main focus.
ReplyDeleteI really your colour scheme i think that you need to re-think your idea of having the white font as it disappears into your main image.
ReplyDeleteyou could maybe move your masthead up abit as it covers your main image.
i also like your photography aswell looks very official.
I love your front cover, it's very busy, it seems like the magazine will definitely be worth reading. It may be a good idea to have a look at your colour scheme, perhaps, the white is great (thought it merges with her dress a little.), but the red is a little dark and makes it somewhat difficult to read, perhaps you can change it to a lighter red? Perhaps it'll be an idea to to place your pricing in a white text box? It'll allow it to be read a little better. Also, you might want to have a look and see if you can space your text our a bit? The lines seem quite close together. It may be an idea to put your barcode and price to the right, but that's really preferrencial I think. Other than that, great job! I especially love your photography, it seems very suitable to the genre.
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